roxyslt_16
Jan 13 2007, 02:09 AM
ok this is my first webnovel so i hope you guys like it! please post a messgae to let me know if you like it!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~/~NO ONE LIKE YOU~/~[WEBNOVELA]!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!THIS IS ABOUT TWO BROTHERS AND THEIR SISTER MOVING TO A NEW STATE, A NEW HOUSE , AND A NEW SCHOOL. ALFONSO, CHRISTOPHER, AND ANGELIQUE ARE TRIPLETS. THEIR MOTHER DIED AFTER GIVING BIRTH TO ALL THREE OF THEM. THEIR FATHER FELL IN A DEEP DEPRESSION AFTER FINDING OUT ABOUT THEIR MOTHERS DEATH. HE STAYED LIKE THAT FOR A COUPLE OF WEEKS UNTIL HE REALIZED THAT HE HAD TO FIGHT AND CARE FOR HIS CHILDREN WHO WERE THE SPINNING IMAGE OF THEIR MOTHER. ALL FOUR OF THEM LIVED IN LOS ANGELES, CALIFORNIA; WERE THEIR FATHER WAS A VERY FAMOUS DIRECTOR/PRODUCER KNOWN AS PEDRO DAMIAN, WHO WAS VERY KNOWN IN MANY PLACES OF THE WORLD FOR HIS TREMENDOUS WORK. PEDRO DAMIAN WAS OFFERED A JOB IN NEW YORK WERE HE WOULD WORK BESIDE STEVEN SPIELBERG, WERE THEY WILL BOTH WORK ON A NEW MOVIE. ALFONSO, CHRISTOPHER, AND ANGELIQUE WILL BE ATTENDING A VERY PRESTIGE SCHOOL WERE THEY WILL RECEIVE THE UTMOST EDUCATION THEY WILL NEED, AND MUCH MORE. THE TRIPLETS ARE VERY DIFFERENT BUT AT THE SAME TIME VERY ALIKE, ALL THREE OF THEM LOVE TO PLAY SPORTS, BE THEMSELVES, ARE ALWAYS TOGETHER NO MATTER WHAT, AND MUSIC IS THEIR PASSION! THE TRIPLETS WEREN’T IDENTICAL THEY WERE ALL DIFFERENT, TO TELL YOU THE TRUTH THEY DIDN’T EVEN LOOK LIKE IF THEY WERE BROTHERS, BUT THEY HAD A CERTAIN LOOK THAT GAVE THEIR SECRET A WAY. NO ONE COULD REALLY EXPLAIN IT OR DESCRIBE IT, BUT IT WAS A CERTAIN ASPECT THAT THEY HAD. ALL THREE OF THEM HAD A CERTAIN TRAIT FROM THEIR MOTHER’S, PONCHO HAD HER KINDLINESS AND HER PERCEPTION, CHRISTOPHER HAD HER GRACIOUSNESS AND HER TALENT OF COMPOSER, AND ANGELIQUE HAD HER ATTITUDE AND HER BEAUTY. ALFONSO IS THE OLDEST FROM THE TRIPLETS, CHRISTOPHER IS THE MIDDLE CHILD, HE WAS BORN TWO MINUTES AFTER ALFONSO, AND THE YOUNGEST IS ANGELIQUE, WHO WAS BORN 5 MINUTES AFTER CHRISTOPHER. THE TRIPLETS HAD BARELY BECOME 17 IN JUNE, AND THEY WERE GOING TO BE IN SENIOR YEAR [12 GRADE]. THE TRIPLETS WILL MEET NEW FRIENDS, NEW ENEMIES, NEW LOVERS, NEW ALLIES [GOOD/BAD], AND WILL REUNITE WITH OLD FRIENDS AND OLD LOVERS FROM THE PAST. THE TRIPLETS AND THEIR FRIENDS WILL FACE MANY OBSTACLES IN THEIR WAYS, SOME GOOD AND SOME BAD.
*Alfonso Patrick Balmori- the oldest form the triplets; quite of a player, always has more than one girl; he’s very sexy looking; his friends know him as poncho; he’s the future captain and quarter back for the football team; hottest guy in brook bridge high, girls drool for him; is a romanticism; son of Pedro Damian; hates Felipe Colombo; and much more! 
*Christopher Ryan Balmori- the second oldest from the triplets; also a player like his brother, always has more than one girls; sexy looking, his friends know him as chris; he’s the future fullback for the football team; son of Pedro Damian; loves to compose music, very romantic just like his brother; hates Benjamin Rojas; and much more! 
*Angelique Victoria Balmori- the youngest from the triplets; loves guys; really gorgeous; will be apart of the cheerleading squad; daughter of Pedro Damian; her friends know her as vico; her life is fashion and taking pictures; and much more!
* [size=4]Anahi Colluci- step-sister of Dulce Maria Reverte; daughter of Franco Colluci and step-daughter of Alma Rey; really gorgeous; her friends know her as anny; best friends with Maite Perroni, Zoraida Gomez, and Dulce; girlfriend of Felipe Colombo; is the future captain of the cheerleading squad; her life is fashion and her beauty; and much more! 
*Dulce Maria Reverte- step -sister of Anahi Colluci; daughter of Alma Rey and Martin Reverte, and step-daughter of Franco Colluci; really gorgeous; her friends know her as dulce or dul; best friends with Zoraida Gomez, Maite Perroni, and Anahi; girlfriend of Benjamin Rojas; she’s quite of a trouble maker; will be apart of the cheerleading squad; and much more! 
*Felipe Colombo- boyfriend of Anahi Colluci; will be in the football team; cute looking; hates poncho; loves anny to death; his friends know him as Felipe; and much more! 
*Benjamin Rojas- boyfriend of Dulce Maria Reverte; his friends know him as Benja; will be in the football team; cute looking; hates chris; plans to marry dulce in the future; and much more! 
*Luisana Lopilato- step-sister of Camila Burdonaba; future student of Brook Bridge High; she’s pretty; will be apart of the cheerleading squad; knows Alfonso Patrick Balmori very well; her friends know her as lucy; and much more! 
*Camila Burdonaba- step-sister of Luisana Lopilato; future student of Brook Bridge High; her friends know her as cami; she’s pretty; will be apart of the cheerleading squad; knows Christopher Ryan Balmori very well; and much more! 
i'll put a cap tomorrow, i'm gonna go to sleep know; bye!!
arianitar2005
Jan 13 2007, 09:44 AM
sounds vrey interesting!!!!!
keep going!
anahiyalfonso_4everfan
Jan 13 2007, 11:45 AM
omgg martha! this sounds like its gonna be really interesting! urs is gonna be the 2nd web in the forum but like a complete american one! lol i cant wait plz plz plz but some caps soon...
and p.s. i'm thinkin that ur gonna make the couples los a and dyc eventually right???
rbd-4-life
Jan 13 2007, 01:49 PM
wow the 2nd webnovela in the forum........
rbdslv
Jan 13 2007, 01:59 PM
i think it gonna be great!!!
i'm looking forward to reading it
Kayla_Corpse
Jan 13 2007, 03:13 PM
cool!!!!!!!! Its Great!
roxyslt_16
Jan 13 2007, 07:41 PM
i'm going to put a cap in a couple of min.
mexei217
Jan 13 2007, 08:03 PM
ALL RIGHT MARTHA...THIS SOUNDS GOOD I CANT WAIT FOR
THE FIRST CAP
roxyslt_16
Jan 13 2007, 08:51 PM
ok i'm sorry i took so long i had to do something, but i'm back!
i'll put more in a while! CHAPTER 1: OH, OH I LOVER HER SO!
THE TRIPLETS ARE IN THEIR NEW MANSION IN NEW YORK. THEY ARE GETTING EVERYTHING READY TO GO TO THERE NEW SCHOOL TOMORROW SO THAT THEY WON’T FORGET ANYTHING, BECAUSE STARTING TOMORROW THEY WILL BE STAYING THERE UNTIL THE WEEKEND, WERE THEY WILL FINALLY COME BACK HOME BUT WHEN THE WEEKEND IS OVER THEY WILL GO BACK TO BROOK BRIDGE HIGH. BROOK BRIDGE HIGH’S NEW SCHOOL YEAR HAD BARELY STARTED A WEEK AGO, WHICH MEANT THAT THE TRIPLETS DIDN’T MISSED MUCH!
KNOCK! KNOCK!
Alfonso- hey Christopher can I come in [outside of Chris’s room]
Christopher- ya come in [inside hise walk in closet, getting some cloths]
Alfonso- has dad called [sitting down on chris’s bed]
Christopher- not that I know of! Hey should I take this [holding up a green buttoned shirt]
Angelique- [walking into Chris’s room] no you should burn it! PONCHO, I need your help!!!! [getting his hand and pulling him out of Chris’s room and taking him to her room]
Alfonso- what do you need help in?
Angelique- I need you to close my suitcases, because I’ve been trying and trying and they won’t close [they were full of clothes]
Alfonso- I wonder why? [talking sarcastically and laughing]
Angelique- hahaha [sarcastically] come on just close them!
Alfonso- I’ll try [poncho tried to close one of the suitcase, but it wouldn’t close] I can’t you have to many things
Angelique- PONCHO! You have to close it!
Alfonso- ok [poncho tries to close it again, but this time he stands on the suitcase and then he began to zip up the suitcase] finally I did it
Angelique- thank you! Know close the rest of them [giving poncho a smile]
Alfonso- are you serious!!!! [she had 3 more suitcases full of clothes]
The next day:
RING!!! RING!!!
Christopher- hello [talking with a tired voice]
***** ******- don’t tell me your still sleeping! Your suppose to be in school in one hour
Christopher- I’ve been a wake since 5 am
***** ******- you better! How’s everything over there?
Christopher- everything is good dad, when are you coming back
Pedro Damian- not for a while, I’m stuck here in Ireland for a couple more months, filming this movie
Christopher- that’s a bummer
Pedro Damian- ya it is. Where’s your brother
Christopher- he’s right here hold on [passing the phone to poncho]
Alfonso- hey dad, what’s up
Pedro Damian- are you guys ok
Alfonso- ya everything’s cool
Pedro Damian- alright I just called to see how you guys are doing, and to make sure you guys remembered you all have school today
Alfonso- are you serious we have school today! [all startled]
Pedro- hahaha very funny! Alright …take care of your sister and brother while I’m gone, I’ll be back in a couple of months]
Alfonso- ok dad
Pedro- pass me your sister
Alfonso- see ya [passing the phone to angelique]
Angelique- hi daddy! Are you having fun in Ireland
Pedro- hi princess! I would be having much more fun if you and your brothers were her. Are you ok, are your brothers treating you good
Angelique- yes daddy, when are you coming back I miss you!
Pedro- I miss you too princess, I have to be here for a couple of more months [someone interrupted pedro damian] angelique I need to go tell your brothers that I’ll call in a couple of day’s alright
Angelique- ok daddy, bye
Pedro- bye [hangs up]
At the Colluci mansion:
Anahi- DULCE! Come on we’re going to be late!
Dulce- no we’re not!
Anahi- yes we are!
Dulce- fine then let’s go! [getting her suitcase]
Franco- you two still haven’t left
Anahi- no thanx to dulce
Dulce- o no but if it was you… [she got interrupted]
Franco- girls, girls, don’t fight know go to school petter is waiting for both of you outside in the car [dulce starts walking out the door, and anny gives franco a kiss in the cheek]
Anny- bye daddy!
At brook bridge high:
*****- hey dulce!! hey anny!! How was your weekend?
Dulce- boring
Anahi- you just say that because Benjamin didn’t call you [dulce gives anny a angry look] but me in the other hand, I had a great weekend, I went shopping and when I came back felipe called me! What about you maite?
Maite- not much I went to my grandothers for the weekend
Dulce- maite have you seen zoraida
Maite- no I was looking for her before I found you two
*******- hola chicas como les fue el fin de semana
Dulce- zoraida I was just asking maite for you
Anny- hola zoraida
Maite- were, were you I was looking for you everywhere
Zoraida- I was with… [she stopped talking because she saw two hot guys walking towards them]
mexei217
Jan 13 2007, 09:02 PM
MARTHA I JUST LOVE THIS NOVELA...IT IS SO DIFFERENT
FROM THE REST AND IT HAS THE AMERICAN SORT OF TWIST TO
IT...PLEASE KEEP IT UP
roxyslt_16
Jan 14 2007, 12:11 AM
HERE'S SOME MORE!!! I'LL PUT SOME MORE TOMORROW! Dulce, maite, and anny look back, when all of a sudden they see two really hot looking guys walking towards them. Dulce and anny couldn’t move it was like if their shoes were super glued to the floor, they couldn’t help staring at them, and it seemed they weren’t the only ones. Every girl that was around the area were drooling over those two mysterious guys, and they didn’t even notice it. The two mysterious guys were to busy talking to each other that they didn’t even notice anything, they passed dulce, maite, anny, and zoraida, and just kept walking like nothing. Dulce anahi, maite, and zoraida where still in shock when out of a sudden a girl trips into maite…
Maite- ow
********- I’m so sorry
Dulce- are you blind or what!
Zoraida- watch were your going next time!
********- I’m sorry I accidentally tripped and…[she got interrupted]
Maite-it’s ok it can happen to any one
********- I really am sorry
Anny- your new here right
********- ya today is my first day. I just moved here
Maite- well welcome to brook bridge high! My name is maite, this is anahi, the girl with the red hair is dulce, and this is zoraida. What’s your name?
********- nice to met you all, I’m angelique, but my friends know me as vico
Dulce- sorry for talking to you that way but…[interrupted]
Angelique- no it’s ok it was my fault
Zoraida- ya sorry
Anny- what grade are you in
Angelique- 12 I’m a senior
Dulce- o cool the same as us
Maite- what’s your schedule
Vico- well I have Mr. Tenchka [P.E] for 1st period, Mr. Miragila [U.S History] for 2nd period, Mr. Webber [Chemistry] for 3rd period, Mr. Mateo [Spanish] for 4th period, Mr. Hargrave [world literature] for 5th period, and Mr. Mello [geometry] for 6th period.
Zorai- you have P.E. with me
Dulce- ya and you have U.S. History with me
Anny- and world literature with me
Maite- and you have chemistry and geometry with me. And Spanish with all of us
Vico- o good I thought I ws going to be a loner today
Dulce- don’t worry just stick with us and you don’t have to worry
Vico- thanx
Zorai- come on angelique we better go know before the bell rings. Mr. Tenchka doesn’t like tardy people.
Vico- bye see ya later
In 4th period Spanish class with Miss Mateo:
Derrick James- hey guys this is the class come on
******- were do I sit
Eddie- lets go to the back! Hey poncho you still haven’t told me were you use to live before you moved here [walking to the backof the room]
Poncho- well I lived in Beverly Hills, California
Derrick- so you’re a holly kid
Poncho- a what!
Eddie- a holly kid you know a Hollywood kid
Poncho- o I guess
Outside of class :
Cristian- oye mami como estas [telling some girl passing by]
Tomas- jajajaja cristian your never going to change
Cristian- jajaja did I say that I wanted to change I love the way I am. Jajajaja what about you chris don’t you like the way I am
Chris- jajajaja ya it’s something jajaja
Cristian-oye pollita did you miss me
Maite- jajaja ay cristian k vamos a ser con tigo
Cristian- who’s your friend 
Maite- this is angelique [critian was about to give her a kiss in the cheek when out of a sudden…]
Chris- come on angelique [puts his had around her and takes her inside the class room]
Crisitan- am I missing something here is she going out with chris [looking at maite and then looking inside the class room at chris and vico, which were walking towards alfonso]
Maite- I don’t know! Hey what’s that guys name again
Tomas- Christopher, but chris for short. He’s new here
Maite- angelique is new here too, that’s weird how do they know each other
Alfonso- hey there you are [getting up for his set and walking towards them]
Chris & vico- hey
Poncho- hey I want you to meet some friends of mine! Hey guys this is my brother Christopher and my sister angelique
Derrick- hi my name is derrick james Moreno
Eddie- hi my name is eddie vilarde [ he was dazed by vivo beauty] 
Chris- nice to meet you
Vico- nice to meet you all
Cristian, tomas, maite, dulce, and anahi, entered to the class room and went towards the back, but to the opposite side [left side] from were vico and the rest of the guys were . Cristian and tomas went to site doen two tables in front of were dulce, anny, and maite were. Maite had told dulce and anny what had happened earlier outside the class roo, when all of a sudden zoraida comes and sits down and starts hearing the conversation. Angelique, chris, and the rest of the guys didn’t see when the rest of the them came in, because they were to busy in their own conversation. Dulce, zoraida, anny, and maite just kept staring at where angelique and the rest of the guys were, as well as tomas and cristian. When maite told dulce and the rest of the girls about what had happened earlier, dul was jealous of vico, but she didn’t know why she didn’t even know who he was, all she knew was that his name was Christopher. Dulce couldn’t stop staring at chris, while he had his hand over vice’s shoulder. Anahi was the same, she couldn’t take her eyes off alfonso, who appeared to be new. Angelique turns around to her left and sees dul, zori, mai, and anny sitting in the table across were she ws, so she decided to go over.
Vico- hey I didn’t see you come in [takes a chair and sits down]
Maite- o it’s because you were talking to the guys. Hey can I ask you something
Vico- sure what
Maite- that guy you left with is he your boyfriend
Vico- jajajaja who chris jajaja 
Maite- ya
Dulce- ya you two look really friendly 
Vico- jajajajaja of course jajajaja not Christopher is my brother
Dulce- [anahi was still looking at her mystery guy, until she heard dulce] WHAT!!!!
Maite- are you serious
Zoraida- your brother! But he’s the same age as you
Vico- jajajaja he’s my triplet
Dulce- your triplet
Vico- jajajaja ya were did you get the idea that Chris is my boyfriend
Anahi- your triplet, but that only makes two of you who’s the third
Anagelique- jajaja wait I’ll be back
Angelique went to the opposite side of the room were her brothers were. Dul, anny, mai, and zorai were still in shock with the news, they would have never guessed that angelique was a triplet and that Christopher was her brother. When all of a sudden angelique comes back to the table were her friends were at, but she wasn’t alone!
anahiyalfonso_4everfan
Jan 14 2007, 12:08 PM
NO NO NO NO NO NO MARTHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U HAVE TO PUT SOME MORE TODAYYYYYYYY !! OR ELSE I'M GONNA DIE!! AWW COME ONE AT LEAST PUT ONE MORE SO I CAN SEE WHAT HAPPENS WHEN ANY AND PONCHO MEET! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!
mexei217
Jan 14 2007, 12:23 PM
MARTHA KEEP IT UP PLEASE ITS SOO GOOD.
I REALLY LIKE IT AND THE WHOLE STORY LINE
IS AWESOME
arianitar2005
Jan 14 2007, 02:15 PM
martha u cant leave us like this!!!
u have to post another cap!! ur web is soooo good!! i love it!!
roxyslt_16
Jan 14 2007, 10:39 PM
sorry for keeping you like this! i'm going to put more in a while!
anahiyalfonso_4everfan
Jan 14 2007, 10:51 PM
ok martha but make it in a REALLY SHORT while!!
roxyslt_16
Jan 15 2007, 12:29 AM
sorry i took to long the thing is that i have the wn in my laptop and somthing happened to my wireless thing so i don't get internet on it anymore. so i have to type it again by hand on the computer i'm using know.
Angelique- girls I want you to meet my two brothers! This is my older brother alfonso, and this is my other brother christopher. Alfonso, Christopher these are my friends dulce maria, anahi, maite, and zoraida!
Poncho and chris were breath taken by anahi’s and dulce’s beauty. Poncho and chris had seen and been with many pretty girls, but not like them, not like anny and dulce. They had never believed in love at first sight, but starting from that moment they met these two gorgeous girls they believed everything they’ve been told. The same was for anahi and dulce, they couldn’t explain this sensation they were feeling inside, it was unexplainable. Alfonso and anahi couldn’t stop staring at each other, it was like if there was no end to their eyes, and the same happened to Christopher and dulce.
Angelique- are you two ok [looking at chris and poncho]
Alfonso- you can call me poncho [staring at her like if she was the only girl in the world]
Anahi- only if you call me anny [shacking poncho’s hand while still staring at him]
Chris- I’m chris [giving dulce a smile]
Dulce- jaja I’m dulce [returning the smile back]
Vico, maite, and zorai were like “ok” what’s wrong with them!
Mrs. Mateo- ok class sorry that I’m late, but I’m here know! Everyone sit down in your seats [just entering the class]
Poncho, anny, chris, and dul finally reacted!
Poncho- nice meeting you all [goes to were derrick and eddie were, while looking back at anny]
Chris- ya it was a pleasure meeting all of you [leaving were cris and tomas were at, while still looking back at dulce]
Mrs. Mateo- ok know that everyone is in their seats, let’s start [cristian raises his hand]
Mrs. Mateo- what cristian
Cris- “k lindo es tu cucu…” [singing] [interrupted]
Mrs. Mateo- CRISTIAN!!!!!
Cris- jajajaja k miestra jajaja I was just complementing you [everyone is laughing]
The class kept going on with lectures and with jokes. Poncho and anny kept looking at each other and giving each other smiles, through out the whole class Chris kept looking back strait at dulce and smiling at her, but she acted like if she wasn’t interested, but obviously she was.
End of classes:
Earlier during 5th period the principal announced that there has been a gas leak and that all students would have to go home immediately and that they will be calling parents to notify them about the gas leak in brook bridge high and that they won’t come back to school until next Monday. So everyone went to their rooms and got their stuff to go home. Angelique ended up being roomed up with Anny & Michelle [some girl who’s in the same grade as them, and still hasn’t come back from her summer vacation]. Dul, mai, and zorai were in the room across the hall. Poncho was roomed up with derrick, eddie, and Leonardo [a junior]. And chris was roomed up with cristian and tomas.
Zorai- so what are you girls going to do today
Anny/dul/mai- nothing
Angelique- hey do you want to come over to my house, we can get in the pool
Anny/dul/mai/Zorai- sure
Eddie- what r we going to do today
Derrick/Leonardo- who knows
Poncho- if you want we can come over my house
Derrick/Leonardo/Eddie- sure
Cristian- what do you want to do today
Tomas- don’t know
Chris- want to come to my house
Cris/tommy- sure
rbdslv
Jan 15 2007, 08:55 AM
I LOVE IT
PUT MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
arianitar2005
Jan 15 2007, 10:42 AM
i love it martha!! keep going!!!
anahiyalfonso_4everfan
Jan 15 2007, 02:11 PM
hahaha martha i love it!!! u hafta put another cap today please!!!!
mexei217
Jan 15 2007, 03:34 PM
AAAHHH THEY ARE ALL GOING TO MEET UP
I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CAP
dulce_rules
Jan 15 2007, 08:43 PM
I love your web!! Its like, one of the best I've read!!! Please, post more caps soon!!!!!!!!!
anahiyalfonso_4everfan
Jan 16 2007, 04:28 PM
anahiyalfonso_4everfan
Jan 22 2007, 03:44 PM
MARTHAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!! WHAT HAPPENED!?!?!??!?! WHERE R U!??!?!?!??!!? WHAT'S UP WITH UR WEB?!?!?!?!? DID U 4GET ABOUT IT?!?!?!?!?!?! PLEASE COME INTO THE FORUM SOOOOOOOON AND LEAVE US SOME CAPS!!!
arianitar2005
Jan 22 2007, 03:48 PM
(anahiyalfonso_4everfan @ Jan 22 2007, 08:44 PM) [snapback]688920[/snapback]
MARTHAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!! WHAT HAPPENED!?!?!??!?! WHERE R U!??!?!?!??!!? WHAT'S UP WITH UR WEB?!?!?!?!? DID U 4GET ABOUT IT?!?!?!?!?!?! PLEASE COME INTO THE FORUM SOOOOOOOON AND LEAVE US SOME CAPS!!!
i think she forgot about us!!1 :S
anahiyalfonso_4everfan
Jan 22 2007, 03:49 PM
I THINK SHE DID ARIANA!!!!
rbd-4-life
Jan 22 2007, 04:10 PM
i love it keep going
mexei217
Jan 23 2007, 09:25 AM
MARTHA WHERE R U???? I KNOW ITS HARD TO
COME IN SOMETIMES BUT PLEASE TRY UR BEST
roxyslt_16
Jan 24 2007, 12:51 PM
ok i'm sooo sorry i got grounded so i wasn't able to get online, but of course i didn't forget about you chicks! while i as bored in my room i came up with the greates ideas for the wn so get ready for a whole bunch of surprises later on in the story ! i hope you enjoy this cap. i'm going to put some more later on ok! Later on at the Balmori mansion:
Angelique and the girls were the first ones to arrive at the balmori house. They changed into their bikinis and went outside were the pool was at.
Zorai- k chida tu casa [sitting down by the pool with her feet in the water]
Vico- jajaja thanx
Maite- vico were did you live before you came to live her [inside the pool]
Vico- in Beverly hills, California
Dulce- wow [laying down on a chair not to far from the pool]
Anahi- omg! I love beverly hills [laying down on a chair next to dul]
Dulce- jajaja don’t you mean you love shopping in beverly hills jajajaja that’s mostly the only reason you go to Beverly Hills to shop jajajaja
Anny- SHUT UP DULCE!!!!!!!!!!
Zorai- jajajaja [people interrupt]
Cristian- wow aqua estan las pollitas [he was with chris, tomas, derrick, eddie, Leonardo, and poncho. They all met up outside while arriving to the house]
Zorai- pollito k asen aqua
Cris- the same reason you girls are here to have fun jajaja [everyone laughs]
Vico- chris, poncho you remember my friends right [smiling at the guys]
Chris- of course [starring at dulce]
Poncho- ya how can I forget such pretty faces [smiling and looking strait at anny, who had stood up from the chair when the guys came in, dul did the same]
Derrick- hey hey hey watch out because maite is all mine [laughing]
Maite- what do you mean I’m all yours, I’m not your property! [everyone laughs]
A couple of minutes later:
The guys went to change and then joined the girls in the pool. Poncho couldn’t stop starring at anny, the same went for her. Poncho was astound by her beauty, her body, the way she move, they way she talked, they way she did everything. Poncho couldn’t explain the sensation he felt inside, he had never felt this way for any girl, it scared him a little knowing that one girl had such control over him.
Poncho- your anny right
Anny- ya [nervous]
Poncho- so do you have a boyfriend
Anny- actually I do what about you
Poncho- oh no, I don’t go that way! I’m 100% strait
Anny- jajaja no tontito I mean if you have a girlfriend
Poncho- jajaja no I don’t
Anny- that’s weird a good looking guy like you doesn’t have a girlfriend
Poncho- you think I’m good looking
Anny- well a little jajaja
Poncho- oh I see jajaja well let’s just I haven’t found the right person until know [smiling at anny]
Anny- [smiling back]
In the other hand; chris was trying to get the courage to walk over to where dulce was and talk to her. The same as poncho, he couldn’t explain the sensation he was feeling inside. He didn’t know why he felt such devotion towards dulce, he had never felt that for any other girl. Chris was a player just like poncho, he only looked for passion in a girl nothing else, but it seemed like this time was different chris saw something in dulce that he had never seen in an other girl.
Dulce- can I ask you something
Chris- ya of course [nervous]
Dulce- k me miras tanto [giving chris a smile]
Chris- um…well…ok I have to admit it, how can I not stare at someone so beautiful as yourself
Dulce- so I’ve been told
Chris- ja so you’ve been told that more than once
Dulce- jajaja a couple of times
Poncho- you know what I want to show you something [grabbing anny’s hand and pulling her inside the house]
Anny- poncho were are you taking me [ nervous and curious]
Poncho- you’ll see
Outside:
Leonardo- oye vico put some music on
Vico- Ok hold on [she goes by the mini bar that was outside next to the pool and turns on the stereo and puts on a cd…]
Music:
No sé como fue que tú llegaste a mí, el destino es así
No sé cuanto pero siempre te esperé tal y como lo soñé
Y jamás te dejaré partir para poder vivir…
Cris- orale RBD
Chris- can I tell you a secret
Dulce- sure what is it [smiling]
Music:
No me importa lo que piensen los demás
Tú eres toda mi verdad
No me importa quien estuvo antes de mí
Yo te quiero hacer feliz
Y jamás te dejaré partir para poder vivir…
Chris gets closer to dulce, he gives her a big smile and leans over to her ear and tells her…
Inside the house:
Anny- poncho why are we in your room [nervous]
Poncho- sit down and wait a second ok [went inside his closet to get find something]
Anny- what are you looking for [sitting down on his bed]
Poncho- you’ll see! Ah hear it is! [walking towards anny]
Anny- what is it
Poncho- it’s a charm bracelet. before my brother, sister, and I were born our mother made one for each one of us
Anny- it’s beautiful
Poncho- ya I know that’s why I want you to have it
Anny- poncho I can’t it’s yours! What if your mom asks you for the charm bracelet one of these days; what are you going to tell her, that you gave it way to some stranger you just met.
Poncho- she’s not going to say anything [sad voice]
Anny- how are you so sure
Poncho- because she passed away after giving birth to angelique
Anny- I’m so sorry poncho, know with ore reason I’m not going to accept this charm bracelet
Poncho- of course you can! I want you to have it
Anny- poncho you can’t! your mother gave you this how can you just give it away to some stranger you just met
Poncho- yes I can and your going to take care of it way better than I can, besides I’m not giving it away to some stranger I’m giving it away to someone that’s really special to me
Poncho gets closer to anny, leaving her nervous and breathless. Both their hearts were beating faster than usual, they felt like their hearts were going to burst of their chest. Anny and poncho just kept starring at each other with such desire and such passion for each other. Poncho began to move even closer to anny, he wanted to kiss her so badly, he wanted her like he’s never wanted anny other girl. Anny just starred at him, wanting to throw herself on him and kiss him and do other stuff. Being so close to each other they both couldn’t take it anymore, they began to kiss each other with such hunger for each other. Poncho put this tongue in her mouth and she put her tongue in his , both their tongues began to rub against each other and explore each others mouth. The kiss got more and more intense by the second, poncho began to move down to anny’s neck and started to such on it, leaving her wanting more and him excited.
Anny- mmm poncho [moaning]
Poncho- you drive me crazy anny [still sucking on neck]
Poncho’s pene was extremely hard and was completely up. Poncho began to take off the top part of anny’s bikini and began to lay her down slowly on the bed. Anahi could feel poncho’s pene all hard and up rubbing against her body. She began to kiss his chest and then she began to suck on his neck. Then poncho began to move down to anny’s breast and began to suck on them and stoke her legs when…
Anny- poncho mmm [moaning] wait
Poncho- why [still sucking her neck]
Anny- poncho stop! [pushing him off of her, gets up from the bed gets her top, turns around and puts it on and turns towards poncho]
Poncho- what’s wrong
Anny- what do you mean what’s wrong I have a boyfriend
Poncho- that’s all jajaja you don’t have to worry he’ll never find out about us [getting closer to anny and gave her a kiss on her cheek and began to move down to her neck]
Anny- [she pushes him off of her and slaps him] don’t you dare try that again [walks towards the door and leaves]
Poncho-ANNY!!! ANNY!!!
Outside:
Chris gets closer to dulce, he gives her a big smile and leans over to her ear and tells her…
Chris- I get nervous when I’m around you [whispering into her ear]
Dul- jajaja and why is that
Chris- because your different from all the other girls I’ve met
Dul- how different
Chris- I don’t know all I know is that your different from the rest of them
Chris gets a little more closer and all of a sudden he kisses her, but then dulce pushes him away and slaps him.
Dulce- estup*ido idio*t@
Chris- what was that for
Dulce- ja and you have the decency to ask [she slaps him again, and everyone turns around and start starring at dul and chris]
Chris- ow [anny interrupts]
Anny- dulce let’s go [getting her hand and pulling her]
Dulce- ok anny but hold on [walks towards chris] never try kissing me without my permission estup*ido! [slaps him again] ok anny know we can go [smiling]
Chris- oow
Anny- [going towards vico] we need to go vico we’ll see you tomorrow ok bye [walking inside the house]
Dulce- bye [walking in back of anny]
Anny and dulce were already out side of the Balmori residence waiting for the taxi, when all of a sudden a car comes out of the Balmori mansion and stops right in front of them and roles down the window…
******- ANAHI!!!
Anny- leave us alone alfonso
Poncho- get in I’ll take both of you to your homes
Anny- no thanx we don’t need your help! [dulce just looks at anny and poncho all confused]
Poncho- anny get in
Dulce- see ya anny
Anahi- DULCE! What are you doing
Dulce- well for starters who knows when the taxi is going to come, second I’m wearing a bikini, what me to keep going
Anny- ay fine then [all mad]
Dulce and anny got inside poncho’s car, then dulce began to tell poncho how to get to her house. Anahi was quiet through out the whole ride.
Dulce- here it is
Poncho went inside the residence and parked car in front of the house
Dul- thax poncho [opens the door and gets one leg out and then she stops] oh ya and tell your brother that if he ever tries to kiss me again that next time lo mato [getting off the car and walking towards the door of the house] bye
Poncho- don’t worry I’ll tell him, bye [dulce walks inside the house]
Anahi was about to get out of the car when poncho grabs her arm…
Poncho- I’m going to take you to your house and then were going to talk
Anny- let go of me! We have nothing to talk about and I’m already home
Poncho- wait I thought this was dulce’s house
Anahi- it’s both of ours, dulce is my step-sister
Poncho- oh well then we need to talk
Anny- I already told you we have nothing to take about
Poncho- yes we do! I want to apologies about what happened today. I really meant what I said before and during we well you know
Anny- apology accepted! Is that all [mad]
Poncho- no, also that I’ll try controlling myself next time I’m around you. And you forgot this[ poncho gets the charm bracelet out of his pocket and grabs her right hand and slides it through her hand]
Anny- I need to go [gets out of the car as fast as she can and runs inside the house]
Poncho- [talking to himself] ay poncho k te pasa con esta chica [turns on the car and leaves]
anahiyalfonso_4everfan
Jan 24 2007, 01:26 PM
wow! lol martha that was crazy!
put more put more!
rbdslv
Jan 24 2007, 05:09 PM
i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!
arianitar2005
Jan 24 2007, 05:57 PM
thanks x el cap!!! is awesome!!! i love it!
keep going!!!
u owe us a lot of caps!!!
roxyslt_16
Jan 25 2007, 12:45 AM
sorry i just got home i had to go somewhere put here's another cap.
Inside the Colluci Rey mansion
After getting in the house anny went strait up to her room, when opening the door she saw someone on her bed..
Anny- I’m not in the mood dulce I just want go to sleep
Dulce- o no your not going to sleep until you tell me what was all that about
Anny- what was what about
Dulce- o no your going to tell me everything
Anny- ok but you have to pinkie promise your not going to tell no one it’s top secret ok
Dulce- wow something bad must of happened then
Anny- pinkie promise!
Dulce- ok ok I pinkie promise
Anny- [takes a deep breath and sits next to dul] I..I almost had sex with poncho [saying it all fast]
Dulce- WHAT!!!!! [shocked] what do you mean you almost had sex with poncho!
Anny- well we were up in his room and.. [interrupted]
Dul- ROOM!!!
Anny- yes room! And he gave me his charm bracelet that his mother made him before she passed away
Dulce- what! chris’s mom died
Anny- ya after she gave birth to angelique
Dulce- wow … ok well what else happened
Anny- ok well then we began to argue b/c I told him I wasn’t going to accept it b/c it was a gift from his mother, but then he said something
Dulce- what! [all interested]
Anny- he told me that he wanted me to have it and that it would be in better hands with me than with him, and that… that he was giving it to someone that was really special to him
Dul- wow your serious
Anny- then he began to get closer to me and we couldn’t contain our urge to kiss, but that kiss got more intense by the second and then it led to necking and then he….
Dul- then he what
Anny- I’m embarrassed to say it
Dul- just say it, it didn’t seem you weren’t that embarrassed in front of poncho jajaja
Anny- dul!!!
Dul- jajaja I’m sorry go on say it
Anny- he took off my top, and then he began to suck
Dul- hold it just right there, I don’t need to hear the unrated version I rather hear the rated version instead [giving anny a weird expression with her face]
Anny- jajaja ok! After the censored scene jajaja I stopped him and pushed him off of me and then I put my top back on
Dulce- thanx for the rated version I really appreciate it jajaja ay anny who would have thought that with a charm bracelet you would go so far jajajaja
Anny- ay dul!!
Dul- jajaja what would you do for a car anny jajajaja would you be poncho’s playboy bunny jajajaja [laughing uncontrollably] jajajaja
Anny- DULCE!!!! [sad voice]
Dul- jajaja I’m just joking jajaja so why did you stop, did you not like it
Anny- dulce that’s the thing I loved it, he was so passionate and so perfect
Dulce- so what was the problem
Anny- well I remembered I had a boyfriend, so I stopped him and pushed him off of me and then I slapped him b/c he told me why I stopped and I told him b/c I have a bf, then he said to me if that was all that I don’t have to worry that he’ll never find out about us
Dul- typical of a guy
Anny- the thing is if he would have kissed me again we would have started were we left off
Dul- well anny your screwed
Anny- DULCE! How can you tell me that
Dul- for starters you have a bf who you’ve been with for about a year and you haven’t even gone further than a few kisses, and you just met this guy today and you almost lose your virginity to him. And second you have two big bight marks on your neck, jajajaja how are you going to explain that to felipe, when he comes back from his trip
Anny- your joking right! DULCE! Please tell me your joking, DULCE!!!!
Dul- jajajaja I wish I was anny jajaja [anny reacts fast and gets a mirror and looks at her neck
Anny- dulce! What am I going to do
The next day:
RING….RING…
****- hello
*****- hey vico it’s me maite
Vico- hey mai
Mai- hey, I was calling to tell you that the rest of the gang and I are going to Acapulco, and I wanted to know if you and your brothers want to go
Vico- hold on mai [she was in the kitchen with poncho and chris]
Maite- sure
Vico- [turns to poncho and chris] do you guys want to go to Acapulco with maite and the rest of the guys
Chris & poncho- sure
Vico- sure maite when are we leaving
Mai- great! We leave today at 2:00 pm… [mai and vico talk for a while, and then they both hang up]
Vico- ok we leave today at 2 pm in mai’s dad’s privet plane
Poncho- cool [eating cornflakes]
Chris- well it’s 7: 45 am right know so we have time
Vico- time what do you mean we have time of course we don’t, omg what am I going to take! I’m going up stairs to my room I have to see what I’m going to take [leaving]
Chris- hey poncho where did you go last night
Poncho- I took anny and dul to their house! Hey did you know that anny and dul are step-sisters
Chris- wow your serious I didn’t know
Poncho- by the way dulce wanted me to tell you something
Chris- WHAT! [excited]
Poncho- that if you ever tried to kiss her again, that next time te mata
Chris- man I don’t know what’s happening to me, but that girl drives me crazy
Poncho- jajaja I know what you mean
rbdslv
Jan 25 2007, 04:21 PM
i really like it!!!!!
anahiyalfonso_4everfan
Jan 25 2007, 04:31 PM
ahhhhhhhhhh i love it!!!!!!!!!!! more caps martha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
arianitar2005
Jan 25 2007, 04:45 PM
thanks 4 the cap!!!
i love it!!
anahiyalfonso_4everfan
Jan 26 2007, 07:39 PM
more please
roxyslt_16
Jan 30 2007, 03:36 AM
sorry for not putting more caps the last couple of days, the reason is b/c i've been having a total break down, i'm studing for 2 test which i have to take next week and i have to pass both of them, i just got home from the hospital because my sister-in-law is having a baby and she just had a false alarm, i have to clean my room and help clean the house, and so much more so i really don't have time to get online, but i promise i'll try to put some caps tomorrow!
rbdslv
Jan 30 2007, 05:38 AM
don't worry if yu can't put caps this week; the most important is that you pass your exams and your sister-in-law- is ok
mexei217
Jan 30 2007, 09:34 AM
WOW MARTHA IT GETS BETTER EVERY DAY
PLEASE KEEP POSTING MORE CAPS
anahiyalfonso_4everfan
Jan 30 2007, 04:50 PM
awww ok martha we'll wait....
roxyslt_16
Feb 6 2007, 05:20 PM
ok sorry to keep you chicks waiting but this time i really promise that i'm going to put some caps tomorrow when i come back from school!
rbd-4-life
Feb 6 2007, 05:23 PM
thanks ill be waiting 4 the,
anahiyalfonso_4everfan
Feb 6 2007, 05:24 PM
arianitar2005
Feb 8 2007, 05:38 PM
what happened martha??
anahiyalfonso_4everfan
Feb 8 2007, 05:42 PM
arianitar2005
Feb 8 2007, 05:52 PM
(they should have a crying smilie face)
mexei217
Feb 8 2007, 07:11 PM
MARTHA WHEN R U GOING TO POST SOME CAPS
anahiyalfonso_4everfan
Feb 9 2007, 05:40 PM
roxyslt_16
Feb 13 2007, 08:45 PM
sorry but my sister-in-law had her baby on friday so i couldn't get online, but hear i am and i leave you all some caps. i'm going to put some more later on! by the way my baby newphew is so cute, i might put up a pic. later on too, his name is juan carlos III torres.
Hours later:
Time had passed and the gang were already in Acapulco. Derrick’s parents had a house over there so they ended up staying there. They all got settled and began to plan were they will go out that night. Dulce and anny were mad at poncho and chris all night. They all finally decided that they would go to a restaurant called “EL BARCO AZUL” and after wards go back to the house and get in the pool and do whatr ever they felt like doing.
At “EL BARCO AZUL”:
They were all inside the restaurant; a waiter took their order and then they all began to talk!
Cristian- hey anny what happened to your neck it looks like if someone wanted to bight it off jajajaja [everyone laughs, exept anny]
Anny- hahaha [sarcastically] don’t you have someone else to bug cristian!
Cristian- jajaja I was just asking
RING…RING…
Someone cell rings and everyone takes out their cell to see who’s it was…
Poncho- it’s me! [ansers his cell] hello
*****- how are you
Poncho- hey, I’m fine how are you
Anny was listening to poncho’s conversation, she was curious to know who it was!
*****- what about your brother and sister
Poncho- their fine too
Pedro- so how’s your first day of school
Poncho- actually jajaja well it was great, but we were sent home b/c of a gas leak at school so we have to go home until Monday
Pedro- are your telling me the truth
Poncho- jajaja yes I promise you, right know I’m at Acapulco with chris, vico, and some friends we just met
Pedro- well I hope your having fun, but not to much fun I hope
Poncho- jajaja
Pedro- ok, just wanted to know how your first day of school went, but I can see it went great
Poncho- jaja yup
Perdro- ok well I need to go steven is calling me, tell your brother and sister I love them and I’ll call back as soon as I can, love you
Poncho- ya ya I love you too jaja [anny got jealous when she heard poncho say I love you to that mysterious person on the phone] jajaja bye [hangs up]
Zori- wow tanto amor
Leo- who were you taking to man
Vico- ya who was it
Poncho- nosy people jajaja I can’t even talk on the phone with out someone asking me who it is, but if you must know I was talking to [anny was just waiting for poncho to say who he was talking to, She had a mad jealous/mad on her face] my dad
When anny heard poncho say he was talking to his dad she was relieved.
Chris- oh ya what did he say
Poncho- the usual if we’re ok and how was school
Vico- why didn’t you pass the phone to me I wanted to talk to him
Poncho- he had to go, they were calling him
Vico- oh [sad face]
Poncho- angelique come on you know dad he’s always busy with work
Anny- what does your dad do
Chris- he’s a film director/ producer
Tomas- oh ya that must be cool
Zori- is he famous
Poncho- you can say that
Mai- I wonder if any of us have seen some of his work
Vico- you might! Have any of you seen or heard of “the night of prosperity,” “night has awakened,” “souls apart,” and well so on
Derrick- don’t tell me your father is Pedro Damian
Poncho- so you have heard of him
Derrick- heard of him I worship him! He’s one of the best film directors and producer of all times
Leo- I love his movies
Dul- ya there the best! Isn’t he working on a new movie with Steven Spielberg right know in Greece or something
Chris- actually in Ireland
Tomas- wow you guys are so lucky
Vico- ya we are [said it in a low voice]
Zori- so that means you’s three have met a lot of famous actors
Chris- a couple
The next day:
It was 8:07 pm; the girls and guys were getting ready to go a club called “Noche De Ronda.” Almost two hours had passed and everyone was at the club. They began to drink, dance, sing, and etc. they were having the time of their lives. Poncho and chris were sitting at the bar drinking some coronas and staring at their dream girls dancing with mostly every guy in the club.
Poncho- what’s wrong with us
Chris- what do you meam
Poncho- that’s what I mean [pointing at dul and anny] before we met them we played around with any girl we wanted and how many girls we wanted, and know look at us we’re turning down every girl that flirts with us and for what so we can be sitting here just starring at them dancing with every guy in this club.
Chris- what did they do to us man I’ve never felt this way for a girl, but their just something about her that I can’t resist. Dare I say it I think I’m in love! [poncho and him looked back and starred at dul and anny]
Poncho- I know what you mean man I feel the same way
Chris-we have to do something
Poncho- I have an idea… [poncho got up and walked away]
Chris- HEY PONCHO!!!! WERE ARE YOU GOING!!!!! PONCHO!!!! I guess it’s only me and you know [stares at his corona and starts drinking]
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